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PostSubject: Winter Dream's Story   Sat May 18, 2013 8:11 pm

Winter Dream

Characters that play a Major/Supporting Role:

>>Princess Winter Dream
>>Moon Rose
>>Princess Celestia
>>Princess Luna
>>Prince Avan
>>Prince Sol
>>Snowdrop (Property of SillyFilly Studios)
>>Starlight Orchid
>>King Sombra
>>Nighttime Frost

Beginning Narration:
 

Prologue:
 

Chapter 1:
 

Chapter 2:
 

Chapter 3:
 

Chapter 4:
 


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PostSubject: Re: Winter Dream's Story   Sun May 19, 2013 9:50 am

I'm like it! Can't wait for more! *is going to be doing my own for Avan now*

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PostSubject: Re: Winter Dream's Story   Sun May 19, 2013 5:33 pm

Thanks so much Novel!

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Chapter 1 is now available!
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PostSubject: Re: Winter Dream's Story   Sun May 19, 2013 7:03 pm

So then wait, Winter is blind? I thought she wasn't! D: *confused face*

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PostSubject: Re: Winter Dream's Story   Sun May 19, 2013 9:02 pm

She is, but eventually after the celebration - a couple years later - Celestia grants her vision for a reason that I won't reveal right now. cx
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PostSubject: Re: Winter Dream's Story   Sun May 19, 2013 9:35 pm

OH. Okay.

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PostSubject: Re: Winter Dream's Story   Mon May 20, 2013 8:00 am

*readings the first chapter* Er; I guess I should of mentioned that Avan's family didn't come with him to Equestria. He somehow got to Equestrian on his own...

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PostSubject: Re: Winter Dream's Story   Mon May 20, 2013 2:29 pm

This is great! But I have a couple things to add.

First: The Summer Sun Celebration began when Celestia rose the sun right after Luna (and Sol in our case) was trapped in the moon (and sun).

Second, Sombra was just a unicorn. Though if he was a Crystal Pony before becoming corrupt, then he's special. Cause Crystal Ponies are in the form of Earth Ponies.

Third. Avan was looking for Sol and Luna after Celsetia locked them away, and then met Orchid and the Fairy Ponies, so I think it's kinda silly to have her there. She's not even an alicorn too.

These are just things I wanted to point out, if you're trying to keep things close to the actual plot.
It's well written, and I like it. Just those few things bother me a bit.

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PostSubject: Re: Winter Dream's Story   Mon May 20, 2013 7:32 pm

Novel; Ah, this is school~ The school isn't anywhere near Equestria. cx

Coco; Whoops! I wasn't aware of all this. My bad - thank you! *goes to edit*
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PostSubject: Re: Winter Dream's Story   Mon May 20, 2013 9:28 pm

Good job me for double posting~

UPDATE: Ch. 2 is up (which I'll continue to edit because it's a bit short...)
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PostSubject: Re: Winter Dream's Story   Wed May 22, 2013 8:28 pm

An even better job me~ Triple posting. /shot

UPDATE: Chapter 3 is now up!
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